One more Translation
This is the Message:
Lust for money brings trouble and nothing but trouble. Going down that path, some lose their footing in the faith completely and live to regret it bitterly ever after.
How does this one sound to you?
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This is the Message:
Lust for money brings trouble and nothing but trouble. Going down that path, some lose their footing in the faith completely and live to regret it bitterly ever after.
How does this one sound to you?
Written by Mike Aubrey
March 10, 2008 at 10:21 am
Posted in Translation
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The Letter to the Ephesians (PNTC) by Peter O'Brien
Ephesians: An Exegetical Commentary by Harold Hoehner
A Critical and Exegetical Commentary on Ephesians (ICC) By Ernest Best
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by the way, I think its fantastic!
Mike
March 10, 2008 at 10:22 am
Doesn’t really sound natural to me. I wouldn’t talk like that.
Nick Norelli
March 10, 2008 at 10:37 am
“bitterly ever after” is awkward. He seems to want to switch between common talk and poetic.
Bryan L
March 10, 2008 at 10:50 am
I was never a fan of “lust for money.” (Doesn’t “love” or “affection” for money, or even the “kissing” of money, make it sound that much dirtier?)
How would Peterson put 4 Maccabees 1:26 in his natural English?
“καὶ τὰ μὲν ψυχῆς ἀλαζονεία καὶ φιλαργυρία καὶ φιλοδοξία καὶ φιλονεικία καὶ βασκανία”
maybe “lust for money and lust for glory,” but “lust for contention”?
J. K. Gayle
March 10, 2008 at 11:06 am
It reads extremely well but I much prefer the rendering found in C (I think).
Nathan Stitt
March 10, 2008 at 11:10 am
Nick, your talk is unique in every way.
Mike
March 10, 2008 at 5:37 pm
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